A Distances: fragments can't make up a whole piece

Although mime theatre A Distances in ICA shows perfect techniques in playing with puppet, media and depiction which I am so impressed by, it might be more considered as a combination of fragments instead of whole piece. Like most of the comedies, repetitive performance activities made the funny effect on the spot but failed to impact on the further engagement. For this piece, I tend to argue that reduction of duration of each fragment might be a good solution.